adaptation of Mrs. Uchiyama
Poetry Writing

1. when an idea for a piece of writing comes to you
- immediately start jotting down any and all words and phrases "imagined"

2. write using free flow “brainstorming”

3. don't exclude anything on the fly
-write all that comes to mind

4. write in short sentence prose
- when stumped, do “story writing”
- condense later *

5. if need be- close eyes, visualize,
- stare at a photo or image that spawns ideas

6. give life to the objects in your poem- personify them – “crackling fire”
Stones

7. write the truth as you know it.
- do not judge your thoughts until later.

8. write feelings and views with passion
- hard things to both teach and learn for some.
She's Always There

9. add a unique perspective
-  many other poets have described the sunrise / sunset
-  see mother nature in new ways
Tune-Up

10a. write through another sentient being’s eyes
- bird’s eye view
Vancouver City

10b. see the tree, feel the tree, be the tree!
Trees Are Naked Now
11. observe intimate details
- quietly watch blossoms open in sunshine
Crocus Quiver

12. the reader must be there with you and be able to step into the poem
- poems make the reader leave reality for the moment
Dawn

13. poets are dreamers
- close eyes -stare blankly into space -turn off lights

14. do not to use too many pronouns unless they are the focus of rare poems
She's Always There

15. poems should have a rhythm but not necessarily rhyme
A Secret

16. do not allow rhyming to dominate the image(s) for the sake of rhyme
- do not change the meaning for the sake of rhyme
this is the biggest challenge
Passing of the Boots

17. USE Roget’s Thesaurus until your vocabulary is massive
  - Do NOT use antiquated obscure words for the sake of rhyme
- alter word A to rhyme with B if there is no clear word for B

18. experiment with different types of rhyme scheme,
some will suit your writing more

19. Free-verse is a poem that has no form
-  like short pieces of prose with intense imagery
Through My Eyes
Dylan Thomas' Child's Christmas in Wales

* Alternately: write a very detailed descriptive prose account of an experience
- reduce to simplest imagery by removing all un-necessary words especially
conjunctions and determiners – AND, THE, BUT, THIS,  HERS
- alter words until there is a rhythm
- rhyme if/as needed

FeedBack to Lance - what works for you?


 
Dylan Thomas